I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week for Writing we have been writing about a tiny door.
We looked at a picture and thought Critically about it.
Then we put our ideas on a piece of paper.
After that we writ our story.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Dylan my name is Reuben from south hornby school. I really like how he woke up in a pool of sweat. Where did you get that picture it's awesome!
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