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Friday, 17 April 2020

Poetic Writing

Today In "Working From Home" I made a poem about what I enjoyed/liked etc. For most of the Lockdown, I was just talking to my friends and playing Roblox. But I went for a walk on most days. But somedays I couldn't because of the weather. Hope You like My poem! Feel Free To Comment!



During the Holidays I liked talking to my friends,
During the Holidays I found that the streets were deserted,
During the Holidays I decided to start playing Roblox again,
During the Holidays I disliked being stuck inside,
During the Holidays I helped by doing the dishes every day,
During the Holidays I felt bored,
During the Holidays I saw nobody,
During the Holidays I needed to go somewhere,
During the Holidays I made scrambled eggs,
During the Holidays I stayed warm,
During the holidays I played Roblox,
During the Holidays I sought cuddles from Mum,
During the Holidays I thought about friends, family, and school,
During the Holidays I fought with my sister a little,
During the Holidays I caught a cold,
During the Holidays I bought Robux,
During the Holidays I loved having cuddles from Mum,
During the Holidays I hated getting the flu shot,
During the Holidays I dreamt of playing Football,
During the Holidays I remembered what day it was,
During the Holidays I spoke to Grandma on the phone briefly,
During the Holidays I set my alarm for no reason,
During the Holidays I bet Hayley in Snap,
During the Holidays I ate lots,
During the Holidays I drank Water and Coke,
During the Holidays I visited Dads house (In Our Bubble),
During the Holidays I watched Charlie and the Chocolate Factory,
During the Holidays I stopped Playing Football,
During the Holidays I planned How to build a plane (on Roblox),
During the Holidays I took my cast off,

During the Holidays I imagined how life would be after the lockdown ends,

6 comments:

  1. We had fun thinking up the answers on this one. Well done Dylan

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  2. You have been very busy Dylan. Maybe you could print your poem and place it in your scrapbook. You may find that your future grandchildren will ask you what you did in the Pandemic Grandpa.

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  3. I don't have a scrapbook Grandma. Maybe Mum can buy me one when the shops open???

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  4. It definitely looks like you haven't had time to be bored. Im crossing my fingers for you that soccer will start up soon. You said you learnt how to build a plane, what kind of plane did you make?

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    1. It's On a game on Roblox called "Plane Crazy" and you can build cars, planes and even boats. I built a fighter jet and a stunt plane. I am also in the middle of building a submarine.

      Thanks Bec!
      Dylan

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  5. I like your honesty in your poem, it has worked really well. The use of repetition by revisiting some of the scenarios is clever and interesting and helps with the flow of the poem. Have you had a chance to practice some of your football skills while you are at home so that when you start playing again you have a few new tricks up your sleeve?

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