I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Dylan its Aliyah I really like your would you rather they really made me think . Maybe next time you could write a bit more because I know you are a good writer and you can do better . One question why would it be weird to talk to animals ?
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i really like how you presented your would you rather story i think you should make the slide go slower so we can read it longer?
ReplyDeleteThanks Caleb But sorry for the slide going to fast but maybe you could pause it and use your arrow keys to switch slides
DeleteHi Dylan its Aliyah I really like your would you rather they really made me think . Maybe next time you could write a bit more because I know you are a good writer and you can do better . One question why would it be weird to talk to animals ?
ReplyDeleteBloq you later