Today for "HR" we had to write down a poem on a postcard that we are going to send to our buddy class at St Peters school in Cambridge. Your poem could be made up or something that happened. There are 6 lines that we put 6 words on. The 1st line was Something you saw, the 2nd line was something you remember, the 3rd line was a person who was with you, the 4th line was an imaginary thing that didn't happen, the 5th line was the reason for your journey and the last line was your own 6-word conclusion. This is my poem, feel free to comment!
Hi Dylan
ReplyDeleteYou have been really creative with your background drawing, it's colourful and matches your poem really well. I would suggest that you could increase the size of the font you have used so that you poem is easier to read. Keep up the great work!
Great job buddy. Lovely poem but have to agree with Whaea Raeywn, you need to make the font bigger :)
ReplyDeleteThere we go, I fixed it
ReplyDeleteWell done. A lot easier to read now
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